24 June 2006

Sharepoetry.com

The above mentioned website has a program called freewrite. You basically write anything nonstop for at least 3 minutes based on the topic. I ended up with this.

Charming...

That's all there is to it

A mockery...

Of the way we go through it

Life...

In which we exist

Consciousness...

The will to resist

Charming...

A handsome prince

A mockery...

Of all of them since

Life...

Loving and losing

Consciousness...

The awareness of choosing

Charming is appealing
And charming is gross
Charming says it all
And all says the most


In addition to that, I used this style called Laurenova . My only problem with the following poem (titled We) is that the first and last stanzas don't really fit together, though the middle ones work. I'm going to try to rework that.


With the strength of writers arms
on which we can rely
we write of innocent smiles
and we hope these feelings stay

We alone can witness life
as we record both vice and charms
we build a piece that is enduring
with the strength of writer's arms

All we know is what we feel
and all we hope to do is try
to understand the heart of words
on which we can rely

We are the activists of this world
we will go five extra miles
we are the observers
we write of innocent smiles

We are somedays dreamers
so let come what may
for us there is always hope
and we hope these feelings stay

With the strength of writers arms
on which we can rely
we write of innocent smiles
and we hope these feelings stay

Posted by the bright one @ 2:57 PM

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